Cyndi Rachol
29 reviews
The author attempts to write Book 1 from the viewpoint of the triplets, completely omitting Chasity's voice by not keeping the "Third Person" sections that were in the first book. There is still a need here for an editor to fix grammatical & spelling errors, but the story pretty much tracks with some additional details due to the different insights from each of the triplets. Book 2 also ends in the middle of the second act with a "To be continued...". Presuming that there will be a Book 3, I will likely read that as well. Like I said for Book 1, this was the right werewolf smut beach read that my vacation needed. No deep thinking necessary.
Bailey Pendleton
17 reviews
Found after reading the first part through a Facebook advertisem*nt. This one is the retelling of the story through the triplets eyes, plot was interesting, very spicy! The triplets are sought after and taking over as Alohas, they finally meet their fated mate only to discover it’s poor girl who lives with them and has been forced into manual labor to pay her parents debt her whole life. They struggle to earn her trust and love while they try to repair all the damage from years of relentlessly picking on her. It’s an enemy to lover trope wrapped in a werewolf package. Writing on this one also needs some major editting, and some holes filled in on the plot but otherwise kept me reading until the end.
Tara
5 reviews2 followers
The book was ok good, if that makes any sense. I enjoyed it. When I read it on an app, it cost me so much money and that I didn't like it. Also, there are a lot of misspelled words and scenes that really didn't need to be in the story. It was like just filling up pages to make the book bigger. The story the leads had, had a good plot to it if it was stuck to, but I feel like it drove off that line a bit. Maybe a rewriting can be done, I. The future with some capable ARCs that know how to spell cause it was bad in the spelling department
Stephanie
1 review
I really enjoyed the story line...until...See spoiler below. I think the POV's stay true to character and Joanna does a good job matching scene for scene for the first book while giving the triplets some individuality. I am always a sucker for the multiple pov stories and I enjoyed reading this one. SPOILER! Moms secret conversation about sweeping the past under the rug. I wildly disagree with how that played out. Not my story, but I really lost interest in a certain someones character after that.
Karleen Burke
17 reviews
I honestly enjoyed the story from the triplets POV more, probably because the author had already developed the story so they were able to add new details and behind the scenes moments that you didn’t get in book one. The triplets have such different personalities and the author portrays them so well. I was bummed it didn’t end at the same point in the story the first one did, but really it didn’t matter to me, I already knew what came next from reading the first book.
Phoebe Torres
23 reviews
I really enjoyed the story. Could have done without having to purchase points to read it and all of the grammatical errors. It was nice to read a fantasy book, I had not read one in a while and this one kept me on the edge of my seat. I could not put it down and was reading at every free moment I could get.
Katherine Graziano (Westrick)
39 reviews
A reverse harem book series. I did love reading this story from the guys POV this time. But I did wish it included the rest of the original story. It says to be continued but you never know with self published authors. Hope she releases it soon. There were lots of grammar mistakes but not so many that it distracted from the story at large
Marcela Garcia
153 reviews4 followers
i liked way more the story from their POV. It was more detailed and even explain Chasity´s POV book way better. In this version you could feel the angst from Felix and even Alex noting how unsure and unworthy they felt after hoy they treated Chasisty. It felt unfinished though...like the author forgot to write the last chapters from Chasity´s POV from the triplets perspective.
- insta-love shifter
Paige
112 reviews
Book two is really just the same thing from the guys perspective. It is not any better and most of it is almost worse. These guys are no fantasy of mine. They are controlling and treat her like a bay, plus call her nicknames that make skin crawl. I do not know what fantasies other women have, I can not image anyone I know would like the way they treat her at all.
Sarah Finley
36 reviews1 follower
An editor is definitely needed with this. Lots of spelling and grammatical errors. The story itself is pretty good and the sexy scenes were definitely spicy. The writing feels a bit immature and rushed. The potential is there though. As a freelance editor, I’d love to take a crack at this, but it’s doubtful the author has plans to do that.
Ula Casanova
12 reviews
The smutty scenes were great but after the party at Moxies and Roxies it seemed like the whole tone of the book changed and had significantly less smut. Also, lot of spelling, formating, and Grammer errors but that may be a Dreame issue? Nonetheless I still finished it in less than 48hrs.
Tahlita Benade
6 reviews
I enjoyed the guys povs alot. Some of the writing could be fixed with proofreading
A. Link
Author5 books15 followers
The book does not seem complete. It does not get to the end like in Book 1. I loved seeing the men's point of view and the behind-the-scenes but was disappointed it was not completed.
Amelia McAuley
1 review
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January 10, 2024i love this book but i cant find anywhere to read it for free online.
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Cassidy Calkins
23 reviews
A Facebook ad of this book reeled me in 🤦🏼♀️
- 2024
Roz
19 reviews1 follower
The story was good but the lack of proof reading was a little unbearable at times.
ELENA BRADBURY
32 reviews
Very lacking in grammatical accuracy but a good romp and saucy bit of fun for a quick valentines read
Arukpe Glory
1 review
Great
MegZ
32 reviews
My top favourite book so far. Loved the story and the narrators. Couldn’t get enough.
Megan
52 reviews4 followers
I don't know why I just did that to myself...
Cheryl
57 reviews
I got sucked in by a Facebook ad then ended up with an app I didn't want and the chapters being locked.
I don't give up on many books but this is one of them.
Tykia
1 review
The book to me is a waste as the POV of the triplets could have been in book one. The story is completely the same and is just dull.
Jessica Ingerson
3 reviews
Absolutely addictive. Read start to finish over 3 days. Couldn't stop
Tonya Hardin
99 reviews
Very addicting and emotional read for the trams she went thru in the beginning. Then spicy as hell.
Beth
86 reviews
It was nice reading from the Alpha's point of view. Some of it was a repeat from book 1, but still good.